Thursday, September 15, 2011

Peer Editing

To tell our story we have a bunch of different view points, that all stay consistent with the paragraph in the about page. We arranged the blog by putting the public address first. We thought that this would catch the readers attention because the statement is interesting, it explains what happened very well, and it has a big picture at the top. We were inspired because we wanted to do something with food and food critics, so this is the story we came up with. Our least favorite part of this was trying to figure out blogger and how it worked. Our favorite part was being able to freely create a story.We did not go with the traditional Introduction to the blog because we wanted to have a creative spin on the blog not just boring information. We also didn't use an introduction because the first article tells the story, and almost make it seem like the reader is also investigating the issue along with us.

Questions:

Is our blog easy to follow?

Is the layout appropriate?

Are the documents effective in telling the story?

Should we add or subtract any documents?

7 comments:

  1. Youre blog is set up very well.

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  2. This blog is very informative. I liked how your information all seemed to fit together. It is also set up in a way that is easy to navigate.

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  3. I like how it is easy to follow and understand. I think you should keep your blog exactly how it is

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  4. I think you guys did a great job with your blog. It was very informative but interesting at the same time. All of the postings seemed very factual and it seems like you guys really knew what you were talking about.

    The documents are very effective and the blog is easy to follow. I liked the pictures you added.

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  5. I like the layout of the blog. i think its easy to navigate and simple to follow.

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  6. The website is very appealing and the color choice is fabulous. Also it is very easy to navigate with your table of contents! Great Job!

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  7. The layout is very appropriate. Also, the table of contents makes your blog organized and easy to navigate.

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